Sorry to sound negative but I can’t read it. Is it my monitor perhaps?
No worries, they weren’t really designed to be read on computers! The text says:
Lines track across, follow us
before we notice. Matching our
movements as we get closer
and closer. Step out
I like it but I don’t get it. What lines track across? Who should follow you? And why before we notice? Closer and closer to what? Step out? Why and how? I just don’t get it at all.
It’s not actually a whole poem – it’s part of a much longer poem that was divided up into parts to be reshuffled. This was a project I did at the start of the year.
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